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Deliver Us Mars

Deliver Us Mars is an atmospheric sci-fi adventure taking you on a suspense-fuelled, high-stakes mission to recover the ARK colony ships stolen by the mysterious Outward.

$29.99Mostly Positive(14)
Story RichSci-fiMars
KeokeN InteractiveFeb 2, 2023

Quick text summary

Deliver Us Mars scored 73/100 on Steam Analyser — Good for a Steam capsule. Top priority fix: [contrast_color] Increase the value contrast between the astronaut's lower body and the Martian terrain by brightening the suit legs or darkening the immediate ground beneath the character to ensure full silhouette separation at tiny size.

Capsule scores by dimension

  • Genre Clarity: 8/10
  • Title Readability: 8/10
  • Contrast & Color: 7/10
  • Uniqueness & Polish: 7/10
  • Brand Consistency: 7/10
  • Composition: 7/10

Priority fixes

  1. [contrast_color] Increase the value contrast between the astronaut's lower body and the Martian terrain by brightening the suit legs or darkening the immediate ground beneath the character to ensure full silhouette separation at tiny size.
  2. [genre_clarity] Amplify a distinctive gameplay visual cue such as the ice axe or a glowing tool element to remain readable at small size, helping communicate the traversal-adventure subgenre more clearly.
  3. [uniqueness_polish] Introduce a more distinctive compositional hook or visual motif beyond the standard space-suit-on-Mars formula, such as a more dramatic environmental element or a unique color accent, to stand out against competing sci-fi titles.
  4. [title_readability] Consider adding a very subtle dark vignette or gradient behind the title text area to ensure consistent legibility across all thumbnail sizes and varied display conditions.

Store copy priority fixes

  1. [feature_communication] Rewrite 'OUT OF THIS WORLD GAMEPLAY' section to lead with core verbs: 'Solve environmental puzzles, navigate treacherous platforming segments, and uncover secrets across Mars' surface' instead of abstract 'brains and brawn' language.
  2. [uniqueness] Add a sentence explaining what differentiates Mars from the Moon mission mechanically or thematically—e.g., 'Uncover the motives of the Outward through a new narrative perspective' or specific Mars-unique environments/puzzles.
  3. [genre_clarity] Explicitly confirm the primary gameplay loop in the short description or first section: 'Combine puzzle-solving and platforming as you explore Mars' abandonment and uncover the Outward's conspiracy.'

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Steam app ID: 1345890