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BOKURA: planet scored 73/100 on Steam Analyzer — Good for a Action capsule. Top priority fix: [uniqueness_polish] Emphasize the signature two-player puzzle mechanic visually—consider adding a subtle puzzle element (locks, shared tools, split-screen hint) that makes the co-op constraint feel distinctly essential, not incidental.

Capsule scores by dimension

Genre Clarity: 7/10 — Co-op puzzle adventure clearly readable. Two characters in spacesuits with connected tether lines and exploration equipment signal co-op gameplay and sci-fi setting immediately. At TINY size, the spacesuits and planetary backdrop read as adventure/exploration, though the exact puzzle-focused mechanic is not evident from visuals alone. The yellow glow and tech elements reinforce the sci-fi adventure context effectively.
Title Readability: 8/10 — Clean title, good contrast hierarchy. BOKURA and 'planet' text render in white with clean letterforms against the yellow-cream gradient background, maintaining legibility at FULL and SMALL sizes. At TINY size the title remains readable though slightly compressed, with 'BOKURA' taking clear priority as the main logo. The text placement avoids the character cluster and sits in controlled negative space.
Contrast & Color: 8/10 — Strong warm backdrop with light subjects. The yellow-cream central gradient provides excellent separation from Steam's dark background (#1b2838), creating strong value contrast against the platform backdrop. Character linework and white text pop cleanly even at TINY size, though the gray technical elements at edges fade slightly in contrast. Overall silhouettes read clearly in grayscale, with the bright central zone anchoring attention.
Uniqueness & Polish: 7/10 — Charming art style, modest originality. The hand-drawn character illustration and clean vector tech elements show intentional craft and a cohesive aesthetic that feels premium for an indie title. However, the composition—two characters on a planet with tech motifs—follows familiar space adventure tropes without a distinctive visual hook that screams 'this game is unique.' The co-op tether visual is a nice touch that hints at core mechanic, elevating it above generic.
Brand Consistency: 7/10 — Consistent art direction, moderate identity. The linework style, character design, and warm color palette appear consistent and recognizable as a cohesive brand, with clear visual language across elements. However, without seeing additional store assets, the identity reads as 'charming indie sci-fi' rather than immediately iconic or uniquely memorable—it competes in a crowded aesthetic space. The tether connection between characters is a recurring motif that could become signature.
Composition: 7/10 — Balanced focal point with supporting tech. The two characters occupy strong center-right real estate as the primary focal point, with the tether line and yellow gradient creating depth and guiding the eye downward to the title. At SMALL and TINY sizes, the composition holds together with clear hierarchy: characters first, title second, tech border third. The tech elements at edges and corners frame without cluttering, though they risk minor crop loss at extreme tiny sizes.

What works

Excellent title contrast and placement. White text 'BOKURA planet' sits in clean negative space on the yellow gradient, remaining legible even at TINY size with strong separation from the character cluster above.
Co-op gameplay immediately signaled. The tether line connecting two distinct characters in spacesuits communicates the two-player requirement and collaborative mechanic without any ambiguity.
Warm color palette pops on dark background. The yellow-cream gradient creates strong value contrast against Steam's #1b2838 background, ensuring the capsule commands attention in scrolling view.
Premium hand-drawn aesthetic. Linework illustration quality and intentional character design elevate the capsule above asset-flipping templates, signaling thoughtful indie craft.

What hurts the capsule

Generic space adventure narrative. The crashed planet survival scenario is familiar territory in games; the capsule communicates the setup without a distinctive unique selling point that separates it from other co-op adventures.
Tech border elements lose clarity at TINY. The circuit board and architecture motifs around the edges are detailed and decorative but compress and blur at TINY size, adding visual noise without supporting the core read.
Limited identity for recognition. While the art is clean, there is no immediately iconic character, symbol, or color motif that would allow instant brand recall compared to top-performing genre peers.

Priority fixes

[uniqueness_polish] Emphasize the signature two-player puzzle mechanic visually—consider adding a subtle puzzle element (locks, shared tools, split-screen hint) that makes the co-op constraint feel distinctly essential, not incidental.
[composition] Simplify or reduce the decorative tech border at edges to reduce visual noise and improve TINY size clarity without sacrificing the sci-fi atmosphere.
[brand_consistency] Introduce one memorable visual motif or color accent unique to BOKURA that could be recognized across store pages and marketing materials.

Store copy priority fixes

[feature_communication] Add a complete detailed description explaining core gameplay verbs: what puzzles require from two players, how communication and timing factor in, and what progression looks like across at least 3-4 sentences.
[hook_strength] Expand the mysterious opening by showing how it connects to gameplay—does the secret reveal drive the narrative, or is it a thematic undercurrent?
[uniqueness] Articulate the specific mechanic or narrative integration that makes this two-player puzzle design distinct from other co-op games (e.g., asymmetric information, shared puzzle-solving under time pressure, emotional story told only through cooperation).
[tone_match] Clarify the tonal balance: is this a dark psychological experience, an emotional co-op adventure, or a lighthearted puzzle game with cute pixel art? Align copy language to the primary mood.

Related guides

Capsule design best practices — The six dimensions every Steam capsule has to win.
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Steam app ID: 3126150 · Tags: Action, Adventure, Casual, Action-Adventure, Puzzle Platformer