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On Your Notebook scored 65/100 on Steam Analyzer — Solid for a Indie capsule. Top priority fix: [composition] Reorganize doodles into a clear foreground-midground-background hierarchy with one dominant focal character (likely the banana or a key creature) positioned to guide the eye naturally.

Capsule scores by dimension

• Genre Clarity: 7/10 — Clear casual indie doodle game. The hand-drawn animal characters and playful doodle aesthetic immediately signal a casual, whimsical indie title rather than action-heavy gameplay. At tiny size, the colorful creatures and notebook paper setting communicate a lighthearted game about cute characters, though the survival mechanic is not visually obvious. The genre reads as cozy casual rather than action, which may misalign with the actual survival-dodge gameplay.
• Title Readability: 8/10 — Bold centered text, legible at small sizes. The title 'ON YOUR NOTEBOOK' is prominently displayed in a large starburst banner with black text on white and multi-colored background, making it highly readable at full size and still decipherable at small size. The starburst shape creates visual hierarchy and prevents the text from blending into background noise. At tiny size the text remains readable due to high contrast and size, though fine details of the decorative starburst soften slightly.
• Contrast & Color: 7/10 — Bright playful palette with adequate separation. The capsule uses bright, saturated colors—pink, yellow, blue, green—that pop against the light gray background and would separate well from Steam's dark #1b2838 background. The white starburst banner with black text provides the strongest contrast anchor. However, some mid-tone doodles (like the tan banana and muted blue creatures on the left) lack strong value separation from one another, and at tiny size some smaller characters may blur together.
• Uniqueness & Polish: 6/10 — Charming doodle style, somewhat generic execution. The hand-drawn doodle aesthetic is appealing and matches the game's core concept of living inside notebook paper with animated creatures. However, the layout feels like a scrapbook collage of scattered stickers rather than a cohesive, intentional composition—it reads more as cute asset assembly than polished art direction. The visual storytelling does convey the notebook setting but lacks a distinctive hook or memorable focal point that distinguishes it from other cozy indie games.
• Brand Consistency: 6/10 — Consistent doodle style, limited iconic identity. The hand-drawn animal characters and notebook paper motif are consistent with the game's core mechanic and appear recognizable across the design. However, there is no single iconic character, symbol, or signature palette that would create strong brand recall—the scattered doodles feel interchangeable and lack a memorable mascot or visual signature. The style is cohesive internally but not distinctly branded compared to top-tier indie titles with iconic visual identity.
• Composition: 5/10 — Scattered layout, unclear focal hierarchy. The composition treats the entire canvas as equal visual real estate, with doodles scattered around the central starburst banner without a clear primary focal point or foreground-to-background depth layering. The banana character on the right and the creatures on the left compete for attention, and no single element guides the eye in a natural reading order. At small and tiny sizes, this scattered arrangement collapses into visual noise; the starburst banner remains the only readable anchor, but supporting elements become indistinct clutter rather than supportive guides.

What works

• Strong title contrast and placement. The starburst banner with black text on bright white provides excellent readability and visual hierarchy that remains clear even at tiny size.
• Concept clarity through visual setting. The notebook paper background, doodle aesthetic, and animal character style immediately communicate the game's core premise of creatures living on paper.
• Vibrant color palette engagement. Bright saturated colors (pink, yellow, blue, green) create visual energy and appeal to the casual indie audience, with good separation from Steam's dark background.

What hurts the capsule

• Scattered composition lacks focal point. Doodles are distributed around the banner with no clear depth layering or primary subject, causing visual confusion and noise at small sizes.
• Genre messaging misaligns with survival gameplay. The whimsical cute aesthetic reads as pure casual cozy game rather than hinting at the dodge-survival mechanic, which may mislead potential action-oriented players.
• Some mid-tone creatures lack value separation. Smaller characters like the muted blue and tan creatures blend together at tiny size due to insufficient contrast between them.
• No distinctive brand identity or mascot. The doodles feel like generic cute assets rather than iconic characters; there is no memorable symbol or signature motif that would enable brand recall.

Priority fixes

1. [composition] Reorganize doodles into a clear foreground-midground-background hierarchy with one dominant focal character (likely the banana or a key creature) positioned to guide the eye naturally.
2. [genre_clarity] Add a subtle visual cue that hints at survival or dodge mechanics, such as a creature in an evasive pose or a hint of conflict, to better represent the actual gameplay.
3. [uniqueness_polish] Design or elevate one signature creature as the recognizable mascot and position it as the primary focal point to increase brand recall and polish.
4. [contrast_color] Increase value separation between mid-tone creatures by adding darker outlines or adjusting saturation so smaller characters remain distinct at tiny size.

Store copy priority fixes

1. [hook_strength] Replace 'tantalizing' with a concrete gameplay promise, e.g., 'Dodge an endless barrage of animated doodles on a grid—one wrong move ends your run' to create urgency and clarity.
2. [uniqueness] Add a sentence explaining how the notebook/doodle framing shapes gameplay uniquely—e.g., 'Each doodle moves with the erratic energy of a hand-drawn sketch, making patterns unpredictable and strategic.' This justifies the aesthetic choice.
3. [feature_communication] Include a concrete example of a character skill in action, e.g., 'Your tiger's Roar pushes incoming doodles back one square, buying precious seconds when surrounded' to help players visualize gameplay loops.
4. [tone_match] Consolidate the mechanical exposition into bullet points or rewording that maintains the whimsical voice, e.g., 'Your cramped 13x13 paper square is your entire world—learn every safe corner.'

Related guides

• Pre-launch Steam capsule checklist — Practical checklist to pressure-test your capsule before submitting.
• Capsule design best practices — The six dimensions every Steam capsule has to win.

Steam app ID: 3971670 · Tags: Indie, Casual, Grid-Based Movement, Action, Hand-drawn